Volunteer group of neighborhood community association
asked me to produce No Littering Poster.
Point of request are 3.
3. with polite expression
Among the most important are "with polite expression".
"We think that
today's youth have a thing against phrases NO! & No Bon!,
please make sentences with polite expression."
For today's youth(=I'm 25 YRS in the meantimes)
"That won't happen!
I will listen to your words
allowing that are said NO! & No Bon!"
I tried to make "NO! version" & "Thank you! version!".
After I brought up preproduction to volunteer member,
all of 4 were adopted.
Design written "No!" was adopted too.
I ought to forecast it was turn down. (why?
All of volunteer member are aged individual,
they have diverse interests,
use computer and are good at drawing.
Why do I be singled out?
"Why do you ask me that? "
"We want sensibility of young. "
But I feel uncomfortable.
The facts is this.
when they provided poster ideas,
it were written that
"Don't discard litter here!
If I find your litter next time,
I will call the police! "
If I find you, I let you pay a penalty! "
You are Criminal!"
They painted designs in concert with sentences.
a design is that litterbug be arrested,
a design is that litterbug be done over,
Their pictures are very good
but emblazoned contents are ferocious. lol
A design is laborious work & awful. lolol
"We can't think genial sentences,
and can't draw friendly pictures in the way of them. "
They are under stress.(×_×;;) I don't have any idea how effective does my poster. But I want ill-mannered people drop off.（ー人ー）